Talk:2000 Camp David Summit/Archives/2014/August

Analysis and Comments section

This section is badly structured, such that it implies a POV feel. The core issue of the section is whether Clinton's comments blaming Arafat, which morphed into a major propaganda meme, are fair. What is certain is that this question is hotly debated by scholars and other commentators. So to my mind the section should begin with Clinton's view, state that his view is disputed, and then go on to say who agreed and who disagreed and why. Oncenawhile (talk) 13:28, 28 July 2014 (UTC)

I have renamed this section to "Responsibility for failure", which is more representative of its content. I have also copyedited it and clarified where needed. Oncenawhile (talk) 08:14, 30 July 2014 (UTC)