Talk:Ústredňa Židov/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kaiser matias (talk · contribs) 17:01, 27 August 2019 (UTC)

I'll start shortly. Kaiser matias (talk) 17:01, 27 August 2019 (UTC)

Comments

• "...the first leader, Heinrich Schwartz, was removed after refusing to cooperate with Nazi demands." Would it be worth mentioning who replaced Schwartz here? Not saying make the change, more thinking out loud.
  • Done
• Considering how large the "Departments" section is, I feel some of that should be noted into the lead. I see there is a sentence about retraining, but it seems like there could be a bit more written there.
  • Expanded lede
• Regarding emigration, is there any tally of how many Jews were able to leave via the UZ? It notes the last group to leave for Palestine, but nothing more.
  • There's no information on this. In total some 5,000 to 6,000 Jews left Slovakia in 1938–1941, but the vast majority of these were gone before the UZ was set up.
• I also made minor edits switching citations around so they are in numerical order within the text.
  • Thanks!

Not a lot to work on, and like your other articles a comprehensive article on a tough subject. Kaiser matias (talk) 15:37, 31 August 2019 (UTC)

I notice the nominator has not been active in over 3 months, so I'm going to fail it for now and clear up the GAC queue. If @Buidhe: comes back and wants to nominate it again, please let me know and I'll be happy to look it over again. Kaiser matias (talk) 20:26, 2 September 2019 (UTC)