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The Thelma Yellin High School of Arts is Israel's most competitive arts high-school, comparable to the LaGuardia High School of Music & Art and Performing Arts in Brooklyn, known as the "Fame" high-school. Thelma Yellin is an art school for gifted musicians, songwriters, dancers, actors and painters and many of them continue to influence Israel's art scene for generations to come.
Students are accepted after a rigorous audience or portfolio. An emphasis on academic excellence makes it one of the best high-schools in Israel.
The campus is based in Givatiyam, a suburb of Tel Aviv.
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