Draft:Miyosmart

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Declined by MicrobiologyMarcus 51 days ago. Last edited by MicrobiologyMarcus 51 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: requires coverage in WP:SECONDARY sources that aren't related or WP:PROMOTIONAL like press releases or WP:CHURNALISM microbiologyMarcus ^{[petri dish·growths]} 21:56, 24 April 2024 (UTC)

Miyosmart, stylized as MiYOSMART, is a lens made by Hoya designed to correct and slow down myopia.^[1] It comprises of about 400 multiple defocus segments each being 1.5mm in diameter.^[2]^[3]

References

^ "Miyosmart | HOYA Vision Care". Hoya Vision. Retrieved 2024-04-06.
^ Jason (2020-12-10). "Myopia Control lenses: MiyoSmart". The Eye Practice. Retrieved 2024-04-17.
^ Hale, Mike (2021-04-09). "Lens File: Making the Miyosmart move". Optician Online. Retrieved 2024-04-17.

[1] "Miyosmart | HOYA Vision Care". Hoya Vision. Retrieved 2024-04-06.

[2] Jason (2020-12-10). "Myopia Control lenses: MiyoSmart". The Eye Practice. Retrieved 2024-04-17.

[3] Hale, Mike (2021-04-09). "Lens File: Making the Miyosmart move". Optician Online. Retrieved 2024-04-17.

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