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| Submission declined on 13 September 2024 by OnlyNano (talk). This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
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| Submission declined on 5 September 2024 by DoubleGrazing (talk). This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
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Comment: With the possible (?) exception of the JJ article, none of the sources cited contributes towards notability per WP:NCORP. We need to see significant coverage, directly of the subject, in multiple secondary sources that are reliable and entirely independent of the subject. DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:38, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
Bea's Bakery, established by Jules Litwak in 1968,[1] started as a Jewish owned bakery located in Tarzana, California on Ventura Blvd. Lenny Rosenberg and Adaeze Nwanonyiri became owners in October 2022.[2]
The owners have expanded the menu beyond Jewish baking, including ingredients from other cultures such as kola nuts from West Africa.[3]
About the owners
editLenny Rosenberg was born in Plainview, Long Island. He has worked on the East Coast developing restaurants such as Viking Bakery in New Jersey and Strathmore Bagels in New York.
Adaeze Nwanonyiri was born in Houston, Texas. She then moved to New York to study at the New York School of Interior Design. She met Rosenberg in Los Angeles.[4]
LARS
editRosenberg and Nwanonyiri work in LARS which develops and rebrands restaurants, bakeries, and cafes.[5] Rosenberg focuses on operations, while Nwanonyiri covers design.
References
edit- ^ "Jules Litwak Obituary (2023) - Los Angeles, CA - Los Angeles Times". Legacy.com.
- ^ Eckerling, Debra L. (August 10, 2023). "Bea's Bakery Cultures Merge". Jewish Journal.
- ^ "Baking Cupcakes and a Sweet World". YouTube. 9 September 2024.
- ^ "Ebony Love Stories - Celebrating Cultural Differences | EBONY".
- ^ "Home". Lars Restaurant.
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