Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Anna Lee Fisher/archive1

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lead: one of the astronauts supported vehicle integrated testing and payload testing>who supported/supporting

Re-worded. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Early life: published three article in the Inorganic Chemistry.>published three articles in Inorganic Chemistry.

Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Selection: Bill, who was now her fiancée>fiancé

Well spotted. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Houston, Texas,>Houston, Texas,

Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

she had the best chance>she had the better chance

Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

"It didn't matter what the pay was,">"It didn't matter what the pay was",

Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Training on a mock-up of a modular section of the Hubble Space Telescope. >Training on a mock-up of a modular section of the Hubble Space Telescope

Removed full stop

mission specialists astronaut candidates>mission specialist astronaut candidates

Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

the five MDs>clarify with wikilink

Done. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

in that capacity>. In that capacity

Can't find this one. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

STS-51-A: perform Capsule communicator (CAPCOM) duties>perform capsule communicator (CAPCOM) duties

De-capitalised. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

The crew went to Seattle, Washington,>The crew went to Seattle, Washington,

Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Spicemix (talk) 14:52, 24 November 2022 (UTC)