Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/Sir James Henderson-Stewart, 1st Baronet

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The result of the review was Not approved.

Sir James Henderson-Stewart, 1st Baronet edit

Article was rated A-class by Kittybrewster. I'll leave a comment at her talk page, notifying her about the A-class review department. Er rab ee 21:49, 22 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose Nice article, but needs a picture and an infobox. Content could also be expanded on, e.g. his activities in WWI are very briefly described, in what battle did he get wounded etc etc etc. Er rab ee 21:57, 22 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I think you mean "his talk page". I can get you a fairly simple b/w head and shoulders photograph which may be acceptable under fair use. His WW1 service would need more detailed research in the Army lists of the era, which I might be able to do. Sam Blacketer 22:32, 22 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Right, his talk page, my bad :) The WWI service record is only one of the sections that should be expanded. Most sections are stubs right now, but it definitely has potential. Er rab ee 23:05, 22 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose Clearly not an A class article. It lacks a good enough intro, an infobox and persondata, it could also do with some expansion and a picture. Let it pass GA, before it's ranked A class. I'm lowering the grade, until it's improved. - Duribald 23:13, 22 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose - as per the above, I think it could use an infobox and picture. Solid article, but could use expansion in some areas as noted above, if the data is available. John Carter 19:53, 24 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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