Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/Hendrik Pieter Nicolaas Muller

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The result was fail due to lack of comment.

Hendrik Pieter Nicolaas Muller edit

This article has been updated vastly in the last week, making it a very complete and succinct encyclopedic biographical article. We are eventually reaching for the highest status for a remarkable and historic Dutch person in the English language WikiProject Biography. Doortmont (talk) 01:40, 29 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose - Content is good, although it generally should have at least one, preferably two, reference citations per paragraph. Also, the lead is probably too short to really comply with WP:LEAD. John Carter (talk) 15:33, 26 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Lead problem addressed in compliance with WP:LEAD: was indeed too short, because dating from the original much shorter article. Reference citations are being worked on. Michel Doortmont (talk) 18:04, 1 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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