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Only Girl (In the World) edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because… I want to take it to FAC, but I'm sure there are bit and pieces which my eyes have not scanned properly which need improving or fixing. Thanks in advance for comments.

Thanks,  — ₳aron 16:46, 17 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]