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Fethullah Gülen edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because: recently Fethullah Gulen is listed as the top thinker in an online poll by the Foreign Policy magazine. he has quite many supporters at the community and leadership levels all around the world, as well as some radical secularist and radical religious groups that hate him. i am trying to contribute this article for some time along with a long list of contributers. from time to time, some user are just step in, and without doing much for the article, and without any contribution they just label the article NPOV. it give an impression to the readers about the whole article; that the article is not in good condition. in reality, it is maybe not good for just one person. labeling an article NPOV with many contributors without locating and specifying the problem even when it is asked, does not seem to be fair. please see the last talk by user tickle in the discussion page for a recent example of it. there are some other such attempts on the page as well. now, before taking this issue to conflict resolution, i would like to get some useful comments about the article from experienced editors. would you please have some time to review the article and let me know if there is a problem anywhere (language, NPOV, etc), if so locate the problem, and provide your suggestion to fix it, or help me in rewording the text for a better article. thanks in advance... Thanks, Philscirel (talk) 17:51, 1 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I took a quick look and it looks atrocious... it's too early for serious peer-review. Start with basic copy-editing. --Adoniscik(t, c) 23:19, 2 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I am archiving this per Wikipedia:Peer review/Request removal policy since PR requests are not supposed to have one major cleanup banner and this has several. Once it has been cleaned up please feel free to resubmit it to Peer Review. Thanks, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 01:24, 3 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Of 100 intellectuals chosen for an online poll, Fethullah Gulen did get the most votes. Steven Colbert got more, but he was not on the list. http://blog.foreignpolicy.com/node/9097. So it does not mean quite what it sounds like, but it does shows that Gulen has many enthusiastic supporters. Nothing wrong with that.