Template:Did you know nominations/Rockstar San Diego

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 05:51, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

Rockstar San Diego

  • Reviewed: Hazeltine 2000
  • Comment: Open to rewordings and different proposals, as there is a lot to say/know about this company. I like all presented hooks equally, so I leave the selection fully to the reviwer(s). Also note that the copyvio detector will most likely tag Polygon with some ~40% confidence. This is because a three-sentence quote was extracted from the website and is presented in a quotebox in the article, which the copyvio detector does not recognize as a quote.

Improved to Good Article status by IceWelder (talk). Self-nominated at 16:09, 7 November 2019 (UTC).

  • Article was promoted to GA status within seven days of the nomination, and meets DYK and GA requirements. The only close paraphrasing that was found was the aforementioned Polygon quote. While all hooks are cited inline and verified, ALT1 and ALT7 are probably the most eye-catchy for non-video game fans (ALT0 is not very interesting and perhaps commonplace; as an example, Squad of Kerbal Space Program fame was previously an advertising company before becoming a game developer. ALT2 is catchy and might be an acceptable choice, but not as interesting as ALT1 or ALT7; ALTs 3 to 6 are quite niche and don't really seem to be that appealing to those uninterested in video games). A QPQ has been done. This is actually good to go now, I'm just withholding giving this the tick while waiting a response from the nominator if which among ALT1, ALT2, or ALT7 would they prefer. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:57, 15 November 2019 (UTC)
    Narutolovehinata5, thanks for the review. Out of the three you picked, ALT1 probably has the highest clickbait factor, so I'd use this hook for DYK. Regards, IceWelder [] 09:13, 15 November 2019 (UTC)
Noted. Having taken a look at the sources though, ALT1 might need to be adjusted; the sources don't outright say that it was the first virtual sex scene, only that it was either the earliest known or that it is believed to be so. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 09:19, 15 November 2019 (UTC)
You're right. It could potentially be reworded to "one of the first" or "the earliest known", if this suffices. Regards, IceWelder [] 09:31, 15 November 2019 (UTC)
Thanks. Would it be okay to propose a modified version of ALT1 that says "is believed to be the first virtual sex scene..."? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 03:33, 16 November 2019 (UTC)
Sure, go ahead. IceWelder [] 08:16, 16 November 2019 (UTC)
Thanks. Proposing ALT1a below:
Since I added a fact here (the "believed to be" part), I'm not sure if I'm allowed to approve ALT1a, so I'm requesting a second opinion to checks its validity. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:41, 18 November 2019 (UTC)
Good to go. It's such a small change I wouldn't say a second opinion is necessary, but here's a tick. --Paul_012 (talk) 20:49, 21 November 2019 (UTC)