- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:25, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
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Mary Ivy Burks edit
... that Mary Ivy Burks (1920-2007) was nicknamed the "mother of Alabama wilderness"?Source: The Battle for Alabama's Wilderness
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Student will do review ASAP.(QPQ not required, see below)
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Created by JANAE2290 (talk). Nominated by Dr Aaij (talk) at 22:35, 7 March 2017 (UTC).
The nominator is exempt from performing a QPQ review, per QPQ check results. The article is new and long enough, all non-lead ¶ with citations, a copyvio check reveals no problems.
- A matter is that the source does not appear to specifically state that this was the subject's nickname. The source refers to the subject stating, "The mother of Alabama wilderness is Mary Ivy Burks..." and "Mary Burks was fated to become the mother of Alabama wilderness preservation". It seems that only the book source may be referring to the subject using this language, but the source has no mention of this being her nickname. However, the source is essentially paywalled, with only a preview available in Gbooks. After performing some searches, I cannot find any sources that specifically state this is the subject's nickname. Perhaps an ALT hook would work out better. North America1000 01:46, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
- Hello North America--how do you feel about "called" instead of "nicknamed"? Thanks for the review, Dr Aaij (talk) 01:51, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
- @Dr Aaij: How about this: "that Mary Ivy Burks (1920-2007) has been referred to as the "mother of Alabama wilderness"?
- North America, I like that less than "called" (and it's more verbose), but if that will pass, sure. BTW, I did a QPQ review anyway, at Template:Did you know nominations/Kirchenlied. Dr Aaij (talk) 02:11, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
- @Dr Aaij: How about this: "that Mary Ivy Burks (1920-2007) has been referred to as the "mother of Alabama wilderness"?
- Hello North America--how do you feel about "called" instead of "nicknamed"? Thanks for the review, Dr Aaij (talk) 01:51, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Mary Ivy Burks (1920-2007) has been called the "mother of Alabama wilderness"? Source: The Battle for Alabama's Wilderness
Good to go for ALT1. I have struck the initial hook. Since ALT1 has only a minor rewording of the initial hook, a new review is not needed. North America1000 02:14, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
- Northamerica1000, thank you so much, also on behalf of JANAE2290. Dr Aaij (talk) 03:14, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
