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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:40, 22 October 2016 (UTC)

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Created by Balablitz (talk). Self-nominated at 14:15, 10 September 2016 (UTC).

  • Comment Review under way. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 14:38, 10 September 2016 (UTC)
  • Review New enough, long enough, timely nominated. Nominator has one DYK so no QPQ required. No image involved. No close paraphrasing or WP:Copyvio. Earwig is clear.
The link to one of the hook facts (concerning the zonal hospital) is not working, so I could not verify it. In any event, I think the hook is not very interesting, and as phrased ("the oldest one" – which? what?) is muddled. The phrase "much before" is WP:Peacock phrasing considering the temporal span is a few months. IMO, we need a better hook. I also have a concern that one of the figures (1,000,000) used in the article may be wrong, and could not verify it. The figure had an odd configuration as originally put into the article ("1,00,000"), so that needs to be verified. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 17:18, 10 September 2016 (UTC)
  • Review All issues above addressed. Every paragraph and hook are properly cited. However, the hook is still poorly worded. IMO
Would be better said as: "* ... that the oldest Railway hospital was established in 1927 before the zonal hospital?" IMO. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 11:27, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
*ALT1: "* ... that the oldest Railway hospital was established in 1927 before the zonal hospital?"
*ALT2: "* ... that the oldest Railway hospital was established in 1927 by then South Indian Railway Company?"
Any thoughts? --βα£α(ᶀᶅᶖᵵᵶ) 14:55, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
  • ALT1 and ALT2 are referenced, cited, and GTG. Hooks are neutral and short. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 15:11, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

Pulled from Prep6 after discussion at WT:DYK#Prep 6. Hook as written is not correct. Fram (talk) 11:16, 19 September 2016 (UTC)

  • Comment Fram Still is the oldest Indian railway divisional hospital and that continues to be sourced. If the source is wrong I wouldn't know, and you might want to give us some guidance in that regard. If you have another hook, propose it. There was no issue with the WP:QPQ. Nominator had one prior WP:DYK. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 13:54, 19 September 2016 (UTC)
    • Not only did the hook say nothing about first "Indian" Railway Hospital, before 1927 there were Railway Hospitals in e.g. Kharagpur, Bhusavai and Lallaguda. Fram (talk) 14:49, 19 September 2016 (UTC)
    • See e.g. Winifred Spicer, who received the 1925 Kaiser-I-hind Medal for her work at the Ajmer Railway Hospital.[1] Fram (talk) 15:04, 19 September 2016 (UTC)
ALT 3 has 115 184 characters.
The hook facts continue to be sourced. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 15:01, 19 September 2016 (UTC)
ALT 4 has 97 102 characters and was suggested by User: Gatoclass. Thank you. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 20:00, 19 September 2016 (UTC)

New reviewer needed. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 16:10, 19 September 2016 (UTC)

  • This article is new enough and long enough. Either ALT3 or ALT4 could be used as both are referenced inline. The article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:33, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
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