Template:Did you know nominations/Baby Ray

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 18:00, 2 January 2013 (UTC)

Baby Ray edit

Created/expanded by Caknuck (talk). Self nom at 06:44, 24 December 2012 (UTC)

  • I am getting just under 4.9x expansion, from 393 characters of readable prose to 1923, at least according to DYKCheck. Otherwise fine; long enough, expansion to date is recent enough, there is adequate referencing in the text, hook is sourced and I found no copyvios. Rlendog (talk) 01:43, 27 December 2012 (UTC)
I found a few additional sources (mostly newspaper articles from the 1930's on Google) that can be mined for additional information. I'll tackle this tonight. Thanks, caknuck ° needs to be running more often 02:01, 27 December 2012 (UTC)
 Done caknuck ° needs to be running more often 03:07, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
Now 5x expansion, so good to go. Rlendog (talk) 03:11, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
  • Both the Early life and Personal life sections do not have inline citations; DYK requires at least one such reference per paragraph in articles. As soon as citations can be supplied for these two, this will indeed be ready for approval. BlueMoonset (talk) 06:25, 29 December 2012 (UTC)
  • I added citations to each of those sections. Rlendog (talk) 18:56, 29 December 2012 (UTC)
  • Citations supplied; restoring approval tick as per Rlendog on 28 December. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:32, 30 December 2012 (UTC)
  • Citation needed tag. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:22, 31 December 2012 (UTC)
  • Restoring tick, based on above review. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:07, 31 December 2012 (UTC)