Talk:Tony Okanlawon

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Review: October 26, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review edit

Latest comment: 6 months ago7 comments2 people in discussion

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Notes edit

added cat Players of American football from Maryland Done
"In the season finale of the 1999" fix grammar Done
- Done.
Do you know if there is a link for source one or is it offline? Done
- Added links for each offline source.
"He started eleven games in as a junior" fix grammar Done
- Done.
"and by the end of week five had" comma after five Done
- Added.
"Okanlawon missed four games due to a "medical issue" which coach" comma after issue Done
- Done.
Add first team all acc to the infobox Done
- Added.
According to ArenaFan, he was signed on jan 5 and waived on jan 17? Done
- Could you provide a link?
  - sry [1] WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:53, 26 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
    - @WikiOriginal-9: Added. BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:35, 26 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
Lagos, Nigeria is linked differently in the infobox and article. Should probably be consistent. Done
- Made consistent.
Could you find anything on his life after football? Maybe he has a linkedin page, lol. Done
- Does actually have a LinkedIn page, though there's nothing useful on it. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:14, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

I think that's all. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:27, 26 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:37, 26 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

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