Talk:The One Where Rachel Smokes

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
Good articleThe One Where Rachel Smokes has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
April 28, 2012Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on April 22, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that two scenes of the Friends episode "The One Where Rachel Smokes" appear only in the DVD version?

DYK nomination edit

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 19:48, 21 April 2012 (UTC)Reply

  • Picture: needs a better NFCC#8 Rationale just in case
  • Production: "She publicly asserted her intention to quit in the past and even turned to hypnosis, with the help from co-star Lisa Kudrow, who suggested a hypnotist" Repetition of hypnosis
  • Cultural References: "…can be heard played at…" should be "can be heard playing at"
  • Reception: "The reviewer criticized… Moreover, it…" The genders don't match. I wouldn't say reviewer, I'd just say 'review', then the problem is solved
  • Reception: This section needs to seriously be bulked up a bit. Only one review is out there? I'm sure there are others somewhere…

On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 22:41, 25 April 2012 (UTC)Reply

Have addressed concerns I believe. I could only manage to find one other review, conisdering there wasn't any newspaper reviews available. Thanks. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 23:28, 27 April 2012 (UTC)Reply
I understand. I does indeed look better now. I will pass.--Gen. Quon (talk) 02:30, 28 April 2012 (UTC)Reply