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Latest comment: 3 years ago3 comments2 people in discussion
Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented.
Update reference to St John of God Health Care to read: St John of God Health Care is one of the largest Catholic providers of health care services in Australia.[1]
We do not have 30 birth suites that reference is wrong.
Hi AnneGartner. Thank you for your suggestions. I am declining the first edit request for two reasons. First, the claim that your hospital network is the largest in Australia needs to supported by an independent source. I can't just take your organization's word for it. Second, labeling a hospital network the "largest" is vague and ambiguous. St John could be the largest by hospital beds, by expenditures, or by number of doctors; but the point is, Wikipedia articles should avoid using vaguely positive terms when more specific descriptions would do better.
Your second edit request is Done. Per Wikipedia's verifiability policy, unsourced statements can be challenged and removed. Best, Altamel (talk) 19:26, 5 June 2020 (UTC)Reply
Talk page watchers, please see a relevant discussion at WP:COIN. Altamel (talk) 19:26, 5 June 2020 (UTC)Reply
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Done. Per Wikipedia's verifiability policy, unsourced statements can be challenged and removed. Best, Altamel (talk) 19:26, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
