Talk:Sarah Colley

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Mjt74 in topic Makenzie Towery Peer Review

Rachel Brewer's Peer Review edit

The sections that you have delineated so far are clear and will allow you to write a well-balanced article on your assigned archaeologist.

The formatting looks very clean and professional. How did you get the underline under each of your section titles? I am still learning.

You are writing in a neutral tone which is appropriate for this assignment.

Rmb97 (talk) 01:22, 1 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

Makenzie Towery Peer Review edit

So far, you seem to have a pretty good set up with the headings. You should add a reference heading for when you start citing information.

Your lead is good, very clean and simple to read. Your current information reads fairly neutral. I think once you add more information your article will be great!

Mjt74 (talk) 04:18, 2 February 2019 (UTC)Reply