Talk:Robert Stroud/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Jionpedia in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Jionpedia (talk · contribs) 19:25, 31 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

Will review this article on Monday. Regards, ----Jionpedia 19:25, 31 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

Extremely, extremely sorry for the delay. Wasn't in the mood for reviewing. Here are the comments:

Lead

No problems

Early life and arrest

Looks good

Prison life
  • There are some problems regarding the date format. In most of the places, the dates are written in mdy format. But in one place, the date is written in dmy format. Please change it.
The Birdman of Leavenworth

No problems

Alcatraz

Pretty good

Legacy

Looks okay

Sources are pretty solid.
Overall, the article is in great shape. Will pass it when the single point gets addressed. Thanks, ----Jionpedia 13:48, 4 September 2013 (UTC)Reply

That's OK, no need to apologize, whenever you feel like doing it! I'm the same and sometimes might take me a week. Dates now formatted, thanks.♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:43, 4 September 2013 (UTC)Reply

Final analysis edit

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

Great job, passing the article.----Jionpedia 15:57, 4 September 2013 (UTC)Reply