Appears to be written by translation machine? edit

I suggest re-translating this article from the beginning. --Mbowden (talk) 15:10, 19 December 2007 (UTC)Reply

I didn't really bother re-translating (because the original Japanense article itself lacks conciseness and structure) but I overhauled the entire article. Hope this is acceptable to the administrator.--etranger 08:23, 13 June 2008 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Etranger3 01 (talkcontribs)