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Latest comment: 10 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
This looks well-written and presumably covers the main aspects of its subject's life. I do think it needs a little touching up before a GA nomination, and possibly an image:
Lead could use expansion to better summarize article
Short sections should be expanded or combined if possible
Image could be added of dead individual under fair use rationale
A GA reviewer might request that all paragraphs have at least one source (not technically a GA criterion, but a common request)
One-sentence paragraphs should be expanded or combined if possible
Print publications (magazines, books) should be italicized in list of references
Hope this helps! -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:37, 3 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
