Talk:Mandy Carter (Ackley Bridge)

Requested move 20 March 2021

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

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• Mandy Carter (Ackley Bridge) → Mandy Carter
• Mandy Carter → Mandy Carter (activist)

WP:PRIMARYTOPIC per view counts and search engine results. – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 16:45, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

• I support the move DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 16:57, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
• Make DAB at Mandy Carter, with a link to these two and also Mandy (TV series), which gets more views and has a titular character named Mandy Carter. 162.208.168.92 (talk) 17:02, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Support DAB at base name, with both disambiguated.--Ortizesp (talk) 03:23, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
• Oppose Mandy Carter (Ackley Bridge) → Mandy Carter, but support Mandy Carter → Mandy Carter (activist). Also support creation of the Mandy Carter disambiguation page, per 162.208.168.92 and Ortizesp, that would list Mandy Carter (activist) as well as Mandy Carter (Ackley Bridge). Section header "See also" with listing for Miranda Carter might be also considered for addition. —Roman Spinner (talk • contribs) 07:21, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
• Support 1st given the character gets more views (971) than the activist (102)[[1]] but I'd consider a DAB at the base name to avoid problems with incoming external links especially given the activist is a real person but otherwise its a WP:2DABS. Crouch, Swale (talk) 09:28, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
• Oppose 1st, support 2nd. A fictional character should very rarely be made primary over a real person, unless they are incredibly well-known (the Harry Potter test!). This is not the case here. On the other hand, the activist isn't especially well-known either. -- Necrothesp (talk) 11:26, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Mandy Carter (Ackley Bridge)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:03, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:03, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Try dividing the lead into two paragraphs.
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
• Mention something from #Development.
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

Storylines

• Remove the comma after "pregnant".
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
• "Emma explains to best friend Emma" - who is the first Emma?
  • Spelling mistake – fixed. – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
• "to best friend" → "to her best friend"
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
• "The trust ask" → "The trust asks"
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
• "while on her maternity leave" → "while on maternity leave"
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

Development

• "well developed" → "well-developed"
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "escape for Mandy".
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
• "asked her" → "asked about her"
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

Reception

• Remove the comma after "comments".
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
• "everyday" → "every day"
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
• Link Digital Spy.
  •  Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

References

• Sources are archived.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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