Talk:Lanny McDonald/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 23:53, 2 December 2011 (UTC) I will do this review.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 23:53, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

Toronto

revise "14 pgoals and 30 ppoints" and "17 pgoals and 44 ppoints".--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:48, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

Ahh, whoops. Bad cut-paste error there. Fixed.

Do you want to mention that in Toronto he was often on a line with Sittler and Tiger Williams.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:53, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

I don't see a great need to. It would thus imply a need to note his common linemates in Denver and Calgary as well.

Calgary

When did you mention the first one prior to "named to the Second All-Star Team". You need to provide the proper link so as not to be confused with All-Star game.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:02, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

Fixed.

Personal life

"His giant, walrus style moustache is McDonald's most defining characteristic" needs to be changed to "His giant, walrus style moustache is McDonald's most defining physical characteristic" since you previously mentioned personality trait characteristics.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:14, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

Also is that a Canadian spelling of mustache?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:14, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

Fixed, and yes, that is a Canadian spelling.

Great work. I am putting this on hold for 7 days. These issues should be easy to resolve in that time.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:25, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

All should be fixed. Appreciate the positive comments! Resolute 20:14, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

I am now ready to give it a pass.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:24, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

Excellent, thank you! Resolute 21:04, 4 December 2011 (UTC)