Talk:Japanese aircraft carrier Taiyō
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Parsecboy in topic Suggestions
Japanese aircraft carrier Taiyō has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: May 28, 2017. (Reviewed version). |
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Merge discussion not here edit
Please discuss the merge proposal at Talk:Kasuga Maru, not here. D O N D E groovily Talk to me 23:28, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:10, 13 April 2017 (UTC)
- Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:10, 13 April 2017 (UTC)
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Suggestions edit
- "The ship torpedoed twice by American submarines with negligible to moderate damage before she was sunk in mid-1944 with heavy loss of life. Probably should "the ship was torpedoed twice by American submarines, with negligible to moderate damage, before she was sunk in mid-1944 with heavy loss of life."
- Looks like somebody already added the missing "was", and I don't think the commas are necessary there.
- @Sturmvogel 66: That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:14, 13 April 2017 (UTC)