Talk:Ira Valentine

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 16:57, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• I changed the weight in the infobox from 210 to 212 to match PFA and PFR
• "letter-of-intent" link to National Letter of Intent
  • Done.
• "Oilers' coach" add head coach
  • Done.
• "He survived the final roster cuts on September 7.[16] He made his NFL" Suggest merging these sentences to "roster cuts on September 7, and made his NFL debut"
  • Done.
• Anything else on his life after football?
  • Added a little bit.
    • That first source said he lives in Longview. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:40, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
      • @WikiOriginal-9: Does my change work (Valentine returned to East Texas, where he grew up, after his football career ended and worked at a forging plant)? BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:30, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
• I added an image

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 17:05, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:40, 21 October 2023 (UTC)

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 19:38, 22 October 2023 (UTC)