Talk:International Fleet Review 2016/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Nick-D in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Nick-D (talk · contribs) 23:33, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
Sorry, but I'm speedy failing this nomination for the following reasons:
- Most of the article's content is not supported by any references
- While it covered an event which has concluded, most of the article is written in the future tense.
- Its coverage of the event is clearly insufficient. In particular, the information on the total number of ships involved, or the breakdown by nationality is needlessly vague, and contradictory. Surely exact figures are possible, and more can be said about what occurred.
- The article's text is not neutral, and reads like a press release from the Indian Navy Nick-D (talk) 23:33, 3 April 2016 (UTC)