Talk:Hiro Type 14

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Buster40004 in topic Good stuff!

Good stuff! edit

Nice article, it does need more citations, there is a tiny bit of WP:NNPOV in there {superior?) unless it can be cited and I had to remove the aircraft table as this article's scope would not normally include that. It's not entirely clear to me but this engine seems to an unlicensed copy (i.e. stolen!) of the Napier Lion, perhaps that could be clarified? Cheers Nimbus (Cumulus nimbus floats by) 22:32, 12 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thanks! I will review it and see what I can do. Most of the material is from the same book, so I can cite the pages - Only a couple of pages on it, some from the Napier Lion page here that I can research and use the citations that were used there. Yes, it is a stolen Lion, but I don't know about the specifications yet - they may have modified the bore/stroke etc. but I have not found it, so far.
Buster40004 Talk 11:15, 13 June 2011 (UTC)Reply
Citations / wording corrected to neutral POV.
Buster40004 Talk 13:03, 13 June 2011 (UTC)Reply