Talk:Gate (Sore wa Akatsuki no You ni)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 18:24, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Capitalize the 'y' in the song's infobox title please
• "Format" parameter: "Digital Download" --> "Digital download"
• You could probably link "Kisida in the "Writer" parameter to the group page for "Kisida Kyoudan & The Akebosi Rockets"
• You need to space "(2013)" evenly after the song "Strike the Blood"

Lead

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• Capitalize the 'y' in the song's bolded title please
• "It was released as the groups first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015." --> "It was released as the group's first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015."

Background and release

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• "It was released as the groups first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015." --> "It was released as the group's first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015."
• Just a suggestion: "Each format (apart from the digital release) includes three different artworks, all promotional images taken from the television series.[A] --> "Each format, apart from the digital release, includes three different artworks with all promotional images taken from the television series.[A]"

Reception

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• You can link "music critics" here to its respective article for "Music journalism"
• "The review concluded with the reviewer labelling it "exhilarating".[3]" --> "The review concluded with the reviewer labeling it "exhilarating".[3]"
• Please italicize "The Outerhaven"

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• "It debuted at number 17 on the Oricon Singles Chart, the groups lowest entry at the time.[12]" --> "It debuted at number 17 on the Oricon Singles Chart, the group's lowest entry at the time.[12]"
• Please italicize "Billboard"

Music video and promotion

• Absolutely great work! Fantastic :)

End of GA Review:

Great work as always! On hold for seven days to address the issues I brought up in the above review. Thanks so much! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 22:38, 28 June 2016 (UTC).

@Carbrera: Done and dusted! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 04:12, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

"Alternate Version"

It feels highly disingenuous to call Sekai wo Koete simply an altered version of the original song with "slightly edited composition". It's got entirely new lyrics, and while the two songs have a similar structure and overall sound, they are very much different songs. The beat, the chord progression, the guitar part — all different.Crossark (talk) 00:00, 30 November 2021 (UTC)