Talk:Donald Forrester Brown/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (There is one at 87.6%, but it appears obvious that this is a copy from Wikipedia, not vice versa.) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a 6.b

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y

Prose Suggestions

• Brown's Victoria Cross was the second won by a soldier serving with the suggest you change this to Brown's Victoria Cross was the second awarded to a soldier serving with the

• Done. Zawed (talk) 09:07, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

• , having been promoted to corporal. suggest , by this time promoted to corporal.

• Done. Zawed (talk) 09:07, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

• However, with Brown's death it was not until the officers of his battalion started agitating suggest However, with Brown's death it was not until the officers of his battalion started lobbying, unless the protest/effort was highly public.

• Prefer agitating at this stage, I don't how public the officers efforts were. Zawed (talk) 09:07, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

• @Zawed: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:24, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

• @Iazyges:, many thanks for the review, much appreciated. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:07, 8 March 2018 (UTC)