Talk:Black (2005 film)

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Nicholas Michael Halim in topic GA Review

Untitled edit

Is anyone willing to add more to the storyline? It should contain the whole story spoilers included. You can write a short description as a sub-section I guess for those who want to know what it's about but not wanting to spoil the movie for them. I would but I'm not to fond of the film at all.

ब्लॅक or ब्लैक edit

Is the Hindi spelling ब्लॅक or ब्लैक? So far on the internet I have found ब्लॅक used only in Marathi.--Wolf talk | हिन्दी | বাংলা 16:49, 11 April 2007 (UTC)Reply

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Reviews edit

  • Jhoomur Bose Malik (4 February 2005). "It's bleak for Bhansali's 'Black'". Times of India. Retrieved 15 January 2010.
  • N K Deoshi (5 February 2005). "Black: Bhansali's Masterpiece". Apunka Choice. Retrieved 15 January 2010.
  • Subhash K. Jha (19 November 2004). "Black Review". Now Running.com. Retrieved 15 January 2010.
  • Gautaman Bhaskaran (11 February 2005). "Black". The Hindu. Retrieved 15 January 2010.
  • Taran Adrash (4 February 2005). "Black". Bollywood Hungama. Retrieved 15 January 2010.

Copana2002 (talk) 15:49, 15 January 2010 (UTC)Reply

Scripts? edit

Should there be any Indian script here? The title of the movie is officially in English, and the language is primarily English, so I can't see why a script is necessary. ShahidTalk2me 16:20, 28 September 2010 (UTC)Reply

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Reviews? edit

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Black (2005 film)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead edit

  • The source for the poster links to Pinterest, a non-reliable source, so I would swap it for something else.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • That being said, the rest of the poster's non-free rationale is in excellent shape.
  • I also couldn't find any issues with the infobox.
  • "he meet several" → "he met several"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "to made another" → "to make another"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Add a comma after "written by Bhansali, Bhavani Iyer".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "budget around" → "budget of around"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "With a total grossing" → "With a total gross"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Add a comma after "Bhansali's direction".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Add a comma after "Best Actor for Bachchan".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Plot and cast edit

  • "after recovered" → "after recovering"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "Debraj (an elderly alcoholic teacher) enters" → "Debraj, an elderly alcoholic teacher, enters"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "when he see" → "when he sees"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "back to be insolent" → "back to being insolent"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • I'm not sure whether Indian English uses the ending "se" or "ze", but if its the second one, change "recognise" to "recognize" and "vocalise" to "vocalize".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "a expressive woman, and is even able to dance" → "an expressive woman who is even able to dance"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Plot section is under 700 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • No issues with cast.

Production edit

  • "Hindi film ever" → "Hindi films ever"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "he would quoted" → "he would say"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "In an interview to" → "In an interview with"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "inspired from" → "inspired by"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "As a gratitude" → "As gratitude"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "Bachchan take a hiatus" → "Bachchan took a hiatus"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "To prepare his part" → "To prepare for his part"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "a special training" → "special training"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "he did an extensive research" → "he did extensive research"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "what happen" → "what happens"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "physical disability" → "physical disabilities"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "an theatre actress" → "a theatre actress"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Add a comma after "produced, financed".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "sure for it" → "sure about it"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "lot monochromatic" → "lot of monochromatic"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Add a comma after "khaki".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "between 1950s" → "between the 1950s"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "were chose" → "were chosen"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Remove the comma after "highest-paid actors in Bollywood".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "film in his career" → "films in his career"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "he shoot a film" → "he shot a film"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "promised to collaborated" → "promised to collaborate"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "filmed is the" → "filmed was the"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "Mukerji stretch out her hand when snow starts to fall" → "Mukerji stretching out her hand when snow begins to fall"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "Media reported" → "The media reported"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "would ended" → "would end"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "mostly of the set" → "most of the set"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "resulting a shooting" → "resulting in a shooting"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "for did not return 390" → "for not returning 390"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "Deputy Chief Minister" → "the Deputy Chief Minister"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Soundtrack edit

  • "Armenian instrument" → "the Armenian instrument"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Release edit

  • "film had a good" → "film had good"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "was coincided" → "coincided"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "28 August 2009 in" → "28 August 2009 on"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "a non-Korean films" → "a non-Korean film"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "Black has been screened" → "Black was screened"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "Prime Video since" → "Prime Video in"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Critical reception edit

  • "mostly critics" → "most critics"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Add a comma after "Bhansali's direction".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Box office edit

  • Add a comma after "the Netherlands".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Accolades edit

  • "win the all four" → "win all four"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Add a comma after "Best Actor".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Legacy edit

References edit

External links edit

  • The link to Rotten Tomatoes is unnecessary per WP:ELRC.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • The "Films by Sanjay Leela Bhansali" should go on top.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:03, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Progress edit

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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