Talk:Birthday (Selena Gomez song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiRedactor (talk · contribs) 19:44, 1 August 2013 (UTC)

• We have some external links to correct.

Infobox

• The track wasn't released as a single, and can't have a separate release date from Stars Dance.
• I don't think it's necessary to note that the YouTube link points to her channel.

Introduction

• "Recorded by American recording artist" – Remove the first 'recorded'.
• "Produced by by" – Remove one of the 'by's.

Background and recording

• No issues.

Composition

• I'd mention that "Hollaback Girl" is also a Stefani song, some people might not know that.
• Wikilink to Icona Pop's "I Love It".

Critical reception and music video

• Split into two separate sections.
• "Upon release" – "Upon its release"
• Un-capitalize the 'd' in 'dirty'.
• "The songs lyrics... the songs panting" – "The song's lyrics, the song's panting"
• "Intersped" – "Interspersed"

Charts

• I couldn't find "Birthday" in the South Korean chart, could you please link to the specific week?

Track listing

• No issues.

References

• Only printed references are supposed to be italicized.
• Fill out a couple bare URLs.
• Ref 1: The publisher for Allmusic is Rovi Corporation.
• Ref 2: Wikilink Metacritic.
• Ref 3: The publisher for Billboard is Prometheus Global Media.
• Ref 6: Wikilink Soundcloud.
• Ref 19: Wikilink MTV.

Just those minor tweaks and we'll be good to go! WikiRedactor (talk) 20:05, 1 August 2013 (UTC)

Okay all issues have been addressed :)--(CA)Giacobbe (talk) 21:25, 1 August 2013 (UTC)

Passed. Good work! WikiRedactor (talk) 21:32, 1 August 2013 (UTC)

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