Talk:Ah Girls Go Army

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Sentimex in topic Style of Language used in Synopsis

Style of Language used in Synopsis edit

LoveFromBJM, the language you are insisting to use for the synopsis is not neutral and non-emotional as per WP:WORDS. The language used on Wikipedia is not meant to be entertaining or promotional, while what you are striving for sounds more like marketing material. Can we please reinstate the way I had rephrased the synopsis, which was striving to phrase it neutrally? Please do refer to synopses or plot summaries written on other movie articles, such as Once Upon a Time in the West, Ip Man (film), Money No Enough, etc. -- Sentimex (talk) 08:24, 16 February 2022 (UTC)Reply