Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Suleiman the Magnificent/archive1

Suleiman the Magnificent edit

I started to read this article, and soon after found myself engrained. After reading it, I was very impressed a man could do so much during his life, and wanted to make it a FA. I hope you too will find it interesting, and will nominate it. AndonicO 23:43, 21 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Commment The reference formatting needs attention. Jkelly 00:43, 22 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Object First, you didn't the nomination right by not putting the fac tag on the talk page and following directions and used the redirect name vice the real name of the article (which 3 different people are overwriting each other right now trying to fix), but I and two others fixed it for you. Also, the external jumps need fixed, you need to unlink the solo years-only full dates get linked, the first three military achievements sections need to be expanded or be made regular paragraphs vice subsections, and the refs should be in cite php format.Rlevse 01:24, 22 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Object. Stubby sections, not well referenced, poorly organized lead, doesn't follow WP:GTL or WP:MOS, has external jumps, suggest WP:PR first to get the article a bit closer to FA. Sandy 01:52, 22 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Object - under referenced + having this article in the FAC and PR wastes everyones time - suggest you withdraw it from here and let the PR nomination run.--Mcginnly | Natter 11:45, 23 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]