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Latest comment: 12 years ago by Nikkimaria in topic Halifax Explosion
Halifax Explosion edit
In general, I like your layout. Some queries:
- Keep the first section as Halifax in wartime, or make it a more general "background" section? Is there any other background info that would help the reader understand the article?
- Which of the "above" are you thinking of merging Communities into?
- Not sure "fire" is the clearest title, as there was a fire both on the ship pre-explosion and in the city post-explosion
- It's not entirely clear to me which of your proposed sections would include the aftermath and blizzard material
Other than that, looks good. In terms of sourcing, I have access to a pretty good Canadian university library (with decent ILL services), plus a lot of historical databases, so we should be able to pull in enough RS material to make this work. Nikkimaria (talk) 21:59, 28 November 2011 (UTC)