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  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): LaurenMichelleBrown. Peer reviewers: Lbelfor.

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@LaurenMichelleBrown: Greetings Lauren! Your article is a great start. More sources and more traditional reliable sources (e.g., books, magazines, etc) would be useful but I think this the article is good shape. I love the WP:LEDE and the IPA! The article can be improved so keep working and polishing it (e.g., addressing the citation needed tag). That said, I think you should go ahead and move this article in the "(Article)" namespace now. Good luck! —mako 00:08, 24 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Hi Prof. Mako! I tried to move the article and it just created redirects in my sandbox. Yiiiikes can you tell me how to remove these and then I will properly move the article! Thanks

LaurenMichelleBrown (talk) 06:21, 24 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

@LaurenMichelleBrown: Looks like this is developing well! I just fixed User:LaurenMichelleBrown/sandbox. You can look at the history to see what I changed. I made a few changes here as well and I renamed the page to Vanga, Bandundu which seems to be the convention. Why don't you take a look at other small cities/towns in Bandundu Province for inspiration for how to improve this articles (e.g., adding an infobox) or something?
P.S. You might want to ping me with {{ping|Benjamin Mako Hill}} so I see these messages more quickly! —mako 00:32, 26 October 2015 (UTC)Reply
@Benjamin Mako Hill: Hey Prof. Mako! I noticed that my article is marked as a stub. Is there anything I can do to take care of that and/or improve it in general! Note: I added two sources from academic articles/peer reviewed journals and can add more if you think that would be good? Thanks so much.LaurenMichelleBrown (talk) 21:36, 4 November 2015 (UTC)Reply
@LaurenMichelleBrown: Sounds reasonable. I just removed the {{DRC-geo-stub}} template. Next time, you should be bold and just do it! —mako 22:44, 5 November 2015 (UTC)Reply