User:Bcritical/sandbox

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Write better articles: edit

Show, don't tell edit

Replace statements with the facts that back them up. Instead of:

The Yankees are one of the greatest baseball teams in history.

Write:

The New York Yankees have won 27 World Series championships (cite)—almost three times as many as any other team (cite)

Principle of least astonishment edit

In the article 'Joe Biden'

Joseph Robinette Biden Jr. is ~~an American politician and~~ the president-elect of the United States.

Comment: Eye roll

In the article Live-line working

~~Electricity is hazardous~~
Comment: Shocking

In the article Notre-Dame de Paris fire.

Some lead joints in stained glass windows melted ~~in the heat of the fire.~~
Comment: DUH.

Template:Vague

Wikipedia:No original research so then find Wikipedia:Independent sources

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Category:2021 deaths

Template:Maplink

<maplink>: The JSON content is not valid GeoJSON+simplestyle. The list below shows all attempts to interpret it according to the JSON Schema. Not all are errors.

/0/query: The property query is required
/0/ids: The property ids is required
/0: Failed to match at least one schema
/0/title: The property title is required
/0/service: Does not have a value in the enumeration ["page"]
/0: Failed to match exactly one schema
/0/geometries: The property geometries is required
/0/type: Does not have a value in the enumeration ["GeometryCollection"]
/0/type: Does not have a value in the enumeration ["MultiPolygon"]
/0/type: Does not have a value in the enumeration ["Point"]
/0/type: Does not have a value in the enumeration ["MultiPoint"]
/0/type: Does not have a value in the enumeration ["LineString"]
/0/type: Does not have a value in the enumeration ["MultiLineString"]
/0/type: Does not have a value in the enumeration ["Polygon"]
/0/coordinates: The property coordinates is required
/0/geometry: The property geometry is required
/0/type: Does not have a value in the enumeration ["Feature"]
/0/features: The property features is required
/0/type: Does not have a value in the enumeration ["FeatureCollection"]