Talk:Tosa-class battleship/GA1

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Latest comment: 15 years ago by Bellhalla in topic GA Review

GA Review

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    • Add some context for what Amagi is; right now the article assumes the reader knows about that ship
    • Same goes for Akagi (which also should have a wikilink)
    • There's inconsistent specification of tons in the article. The first part uses "ton" (without conversion) + one that was identifiable as long tons with a conversion to tonnes; The latter part uses only tonnes. All non-duplicated figures should have conversions.
    • There were a couple of typos where the class and the lead ship were referred to as Toga rather than Tosa. (If I was wrong to correct those please restore them.)
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    • I have no problem with the fair-use rationale for the line drawing, but others that take a more hard-line stance might take exception to the "no free alternative can be created"
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Overall a nice article. The inconsistency with the (long?) tons/tonnes is my biggest concern. Should be easy to resolve. — Bellhalla (talk) 19:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

Everything looks good, so I'm passing. Good job, guys! — Bellhalla (talk) 19:08, 15 April 2009 (UTC)Reply