Talk:Rørvik Airport/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 23:21, 21 November 2012 (UTC)

Welcome to Rørvik Airport, Ryum's Norway Airlines, I TBrandley am your pilot today, we will be taking out in a few minutes to the Penticton Regional Airport. Enjoy the flight!

• "five other regional airport" should be plural, missing an "s" at the end
  • Fixed. Arsenikk ^(talk) 18:13, 23 November 2012 (UTC)
• "along with for three" remove "for", unnecessary
  • Fixed. Arsenikk ^(talk) 18:13, 23 November 2012 (UTC)
• "announced on on" two "on"? Remove one
  • Would you prefer the first or the last removed? ;) Arsenikk ^(talk) 18:13, 23 November 2012 (UTC)
• "bus service to the airport" for more clearer prose I would add "available" between "service" and "to"
  • Fixed. Arsenikk ^(talk) 18:13, 23 November 2012 (UTC)
• What's the point of table being sortable if there is only one item?
  • Ask the people who made the template. It's a standardized table designed by WikiProject Airports, although it is by far the most elegant on Wikipedia. Arsenikk ^(talk) 18:13, 23 November 2012 (UTC)
• Can you ensure that the table meets WP:ACCESS for scope cols and rows
  • This uses a standardized template which is transcluded on every single airport article, so I'm not going to mess with it. WP:ACCESS and DTT are not part of the GA criteria so I would rather not pursue it any further. Arsenikk ^(talk) 18:13, 23 November 2012 (UTC)
• Can you also ensure that it meets WP:DTT for table captions?
  • See above. Arsenikk ^(talk) 18:13, 23 November 2012 (UTC)
• Any external links?
  • Official site is in the navbox. Arsenikk ^(talk) 18:13, 23 November 2012 (UTC)
• Any related portals to this subject?
  • Added. Arsenikk ^(talk) 18:13, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

Great work overall. Once the above issues are addressed, I will pass the article based on the good article criteria. Well done! TBrandley 02:58, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review and sorry for the slight delay. As I noted above, I used a standardized template for the table that doesn't meet any guideline but is within the scope of the GA criteria. Arsenikk ^(talk) 18:13, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

Your very welcome. I will pass the article based on your changes now. TBrandley 23:15, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

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