Talk:John S. Walmsley Jr./GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:38, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:38, 3 December 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   Use bomber instead of bomber aircraft.

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   Hyphenate anti-aircraft.

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   Consolidate the paragraphs in the beginning of the biography sentence into one. Addd "

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

   Need publisher location for Ecker.

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   Operation Strangle link goes to the one in Italy in 1944.

   That article also makes reference to the 1950 Operation Strangle since both missions were essentially the same thing against different targets. —Ed!^(talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   If you linked in the lede, there's no need to link again in the main body, IMO.

   WP:LINK says links should appear once in the lede and once in the body of the text. —Ed!^(talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   DMY as US military article.

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:19, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   Was the train shooting at the aircraft or were AA emplacements along the RR track?

   Clarified. —Ed!^(talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Made all the fixes. Thanks for your review! —Ed!^(talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)