Talk:Guitar Hero Mobile series/GA1

GA Review

Latest comment: 15 years ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Hi. I'm going to review this page.

Well, I'm going to put this nomination on hold because of this sentence in the lead: "The game was developed by MachineWorks Northwest LLC and is published by Hands-On Mobile for [1]." For what? LOL

That's about it. I personally would like a ref # after the first sentence in Reception, but other than that everything looks fine. Just fix that sentence and everything should work out. Intothewoods29 (talk) 15:51, 31 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

I've removed the incomplete sentence, and to stick to one lead referencing style, I've moved the references out of the lead to the infobox so that there are no citations in the lead (delegating them to the rest of the article). --MASEM 16:05, 31 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

Great. I can't see anything wrong with this, so I'm promoting it to GA! My suggestions, if you were planning to go for FA, I'd expand it, and just make sure everything is neutral (like the first sentence in Reception). Good work.

1. flows well, clear
2. plenty of refs
3.stays on topic
4. neutral
5. stable
6. pics all tagged Intothewoods29 (talk) 00:13, 1 August 2008 (UTC)Reply

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