Talk:Lefebvre's Charles Town expedition/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:17, 25 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    This is awkward: A brief encounter with a privateer separated the Brillant, one of the expedition's six ships. As is this: On September 11 Lieutenant Colonel Rhett sailed the colonial flotilla out to find the invaders, but found they had sailed off. Clarify this: They also mobilized Indian forces to attack Mobile, but these efforts were frustrated in part by French diplomacy and false rumors of another Franco-Spanish expedition. Was it the combination of French diplomacy and false rumors that frustrated the planned attack? Rephrased all of these. Magic♪piano 12:35, 4 September 2012 (UTC)Reply
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
    Add state of publication for all those that don't have it, and need place of publication for Marley, which should also be listed alphabetically in the References section. Done Magic♪piano 12:35, 4 September 2012 (UTC)Reply
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: