Talk:Battle of Binh Gia/GA1

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GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 22:38, 1 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: Two found, but I cannot resolve; Chau Thanh could be any one of nine possible districts with articles, Bình Mỹ could be either of two. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:41, 1 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • I have fixed that and added links for Chau Thanh (Kien Giang) and Binh My (Ca Mau).Canpark (talk) 07:49, 2 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:43, 1 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Checking against GA criteria edit

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    I made a number of minor copy-edits.[1] Otherwise well organized and written.
    ''...to protect the important sea transportation routes which stretched from North Vietnam to the Mekong Delta region Do you mean "river" or "water" as I find it unlikely that the Viet Cong used long transits via the South China sea to reach the Mekong delta?
    • I clarified that sentence: I replaced the word 'delta' with 'river', I also clarify who used the sea routes to supply the Viet Cong.Canpark (talk) 07:40, 2 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
  1. OK, I think that will do.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    I assume good faith for off-line sources. It would be good to provide ISBNs, where available, but not a GA requirement.
    * I have fixed the references with a reference template, and added ISBN's wherever I could.Canpark (talk) 07:40, 2 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Focussed and thorough
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
    NPOV
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Suitable FUR and captions and licenses.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    On Hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 23:07, 1 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
    Thanks for answering my concerns. i am happy to pass this as a good article. Congratulations! Jezhotwells (talk) 11:26, 2 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Wrong coordinates edit

Could someone please check the coordinates? Teh ones given in the article are definitely wrong as they point to a place northeast of Hanoi. --88.73.40.118 (talk) 12:54, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Okay, I think I found the right Binh Gia; coordinates have been corrected. --88.73.51.8 (talk) 13:16, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply