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Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Copy Edit of the Month/March 2013

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The GOCE March Copy Edit of the Month is a two stage event. Submissions for the contest will run from 00:00 on 1 March 2013 (UTC) until 23:59 on 31 March 2013 (UTC). All submissions must be from copy edits that occur during the month of March. Voting on submissions will run from 00:00 on 1 April 2013 (UTC) until 23:59 on 30 April 2013 (UTC).

  • The voting period is now closed.
  • The submission period is now closed.

Submissions edit

Northamerica1000(talk) edit

Support edit

  1. Nice work! The article is much improved due to your efforts. GabeMc (talk|contribs) 01:20, 23 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Discussion edit

While your work here is impressive, it's more like your wrote the article from scratch rather than copy edited existing text. —Torchiest talkedits 13:30, 22 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

AGK (talk) edit

Support edit

  1. Anastasia (talk) 20:08, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  2. —Theopolisme (talk) 11:12, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  3. Nice job on a complex topic. —Torchiest talkedits 13:30, 22 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks! AGK [•] 10
    08, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
  4. Great job of article improvement generally. I have a couple of comments on the writing -- see Discussion. --Stfg (talk) 14:00, 25 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Discussion edit

  • Great job improving the article. An easy support. Please note that "behaviour" is the correct spelling in British English; "behavior" is strictly American. The same applies to colour, neighbour, demeanour, honour, favour and probably a few more I cant think of at the moment (but tenor is the same both sides of the Atlantic). The other thing is please to be more sparing with dashes -- they aren't the equivalent of commas. Almost -- if not quite all -- the commas you replaced with dashes would have been better left as commas -- the dashes give a breathlessly excited effect -- like a schoolboy's diary. (See what I mean?) Dashes surrounding parenthetical clauses are used for special purposes like highlighting a contrast. --Stfg (talk) 14:00, 25 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Wilhelmina Will (talk) edit

Support edit

Discussion edit

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