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Mining industry of Botswana edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because this is an article that needs attention (old version was 19 years out of date) and I would also like some advice to promote this to GA or A class. By the way, I’ve substantially contributed to the page (https://xtools.wmcloud.org/articleinfo/en.wikipedia.org/Mining_industry_of_Botswana) and updated everything. Feedback would be appreciated.

Thanks, 48JCL talk 01:57, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720 edit

Comments after a quick skim:

The article feels disorganised. It goes from diamonds, to a mining company, to other commodities, to political influence. I suggest that this be organised by either type of mining, geography, company, or some other similarity in the titles.
Are there any additional sources for the article? Try looking at WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, or your local library system.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:02, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I’m unable to access the Wikipedia library, but I mainly use JSTOR. 48JCL (talk) 15:23, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]