Talk:Robert Spurdle/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 13:25, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:25, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
- No DABs, external links OK
- Hyphenate short service, long range, air support
- He shot down a Bf 109 on 5 December He "then" shot down
- I'm a more than a bit uncomfortable on relying on Thompson for NZ aerial victories. It's almost 70 years old and at that time, researchers hadn't really had time to compare claims and losses for each side. That's really only begun for 1941 in these last two decades, mostly by John Foreman.
- Tell the reader than the Umgeni is a troopship or whatever
- Nicely done--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:27, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
- Sturmvogel 66, thanks for the review, I have made the suggested changes in response to your feedback. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:28, 15 April 2021 (UTC)