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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 17:38, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR 17:38, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
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Checking against the GA criteria edit
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
- The lead requires an expansion for it to summarise the article. For an article this size I would say that it needs at least a paragraph and not just one sentence, per WP:LEAD
- "Having started only 7 matches by the end of January 2015" - seven (I think in this case it needs to be written out)
- "where he paired up with compatiot Marcelo Bielsa" - I don't know what this means
- Ref 24 is missing an access date
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- No original research found.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
The only thing holding this back is the length of the lead. It needs to be expanded to at least a paragraph (a few more sentences should do it) for it to meet WP:LEADLENGTH. Other than that, it is well written and comprehensive so it should easily pass afterwards. 
JAGUAR 13:04, 27 November 2016 (UTC)
Edits edit
Hi Jaguar (talk, thanks for reviewing the article. I have made the following corrections as per your above recommendations.
- The lead has been extended and gives a broad overview of his career so far with key points.
- '7' has been changed to 'seven'
- I have added an access date to ref 24
- 'compatiot' is meant to read 'compatriot' - Bielsa and Ocampos are from the same nation. I have corrected the spelling thereof.
Cheers, Liam E. Bekker (talk) 16:04, 27 November 2016 (UTC)