Talk:Fusajiro Yamauchi

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Can anyone find any evidence/citation of his remians being entombed in Nintendo's headquarters? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.175.93.30 (talk) 21:46, 24 February 2008 (UTC)

                                                      NINTENDO  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.200.190.218 (talk) 15:33, 21 August 2019 (UTC) 

Sources used for GA nomination.

The following books were read online :

The Story of Nintendo : https://books.google.be/books?id=M-pGHGDm5a4C&redir_esc=y (Google Books)

Game Over, Press Start to Continue: How Nintendo Conquered the World : https://archive.org/details/0966961706/mode/2up Maxime12346

Nintendo: The Company and Its Founders : https://archive.org/details/nintendocompanyi0000fire/mode/2up

(talk) 19:56, 14 May 2024 (UTC)

GA Review

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Nominator: DanganMachin (talk · contribs) 09:51, 7 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: NatwonTSG2 (talk · contribs) 19:52, 6 June 2024 (UTC)

Hello @DanganMachin I decided to review this article because it looks pretty simple and easy so. This article seems a handful of fixes to be addressed.

Review

Lead

• For the infobox, not much other than the fact that you're unable find sources for his unnamed daughter and the cause of his death. I think this source might help a bit.
• In the first sentence, you could change who founded Yamauchi Nintendo, the company now known as Nintendo into who founded Yamauchi Nintendo, later known as Nintendo.

Early life

• Shouldn't this section's title be renamed into Early life.
• P2: Could this section be one entire paragraph and you could removed the additional reference there.

Yamauchi Fusajirô Shôten or Yamauchi Nintendo

Location	Problem
P3 S4	A typo for Fusajiro
P5 S5	You forget to put a period at the end of the sentence.
P7 S1	removed even because it kinda made the sentence like a direct quote.
P8 S1	unless you're making a direct quote, removed yet again.

Personal details

• S1: With no son into Without a son
• S4: change claim into claimed

Fixs.

Thank you for reviewing my article !

Here are the fixs I made :

Lead

• According to Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Perennial sources NNDB is a deprecated source and shouldn't be used. So I consider it done.

• Sentence Done.

Early Life

• Before Nintendo -> Early Life Done.

• One paragraph + reference. I have fused the first two paragraphs but I don't see what reference you are talking about. Done.

Yamauchi Fusajirô Shôten or Yamauchi Nintendo

• Typo fixed. Done.

• Point added. Done.

• removed even Done.

• removed yet again Done.

Personal details

• S1 Done.

• S4 Done.

DanganMachin (talk) 17:09, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

@NatwonTSG2 I have finished to adress the fixs you said the article needed. (: Could you please put the follow-up review in the form of a table if possible ? Thank you for your time. DanganMachin (talk) 17:24, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

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• ... that before founding Nintendo, Fusajiro Yamauchi sold lime in Kyoto?

• Source: "Avec un sens éclairé du business dans le sang, il développe sa petite société en ouvrant de nombreuses autres boutiques de vente de chaux à travers tout Kyôto." https://omakebooks.com/fr/l-histoire-de-nintendo/274-l-histoire-de-nintendo-vol1.html

• Reviewed:

Improved to Good Article status by DanganMachin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

DanganMachin (talk) 15:36, 9 June 2024 (UTC).