Draft talk:RyzallNoh
Latest comment: 22 days ago by RyzallNoh in topic Seeking suggestions to improve my article page
Seeking suggestions to improve my article page edit
This is the first time I created an article page. suggest me to improvements before I submit this for approval. RyzallNoh (talk) 08:46, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- Firstly remove everything sourced to Wikipedia, Spotify, YouTube and music.apple, then remove everything that has no source, then re-write the rest in a dry neutral tone referring only to what independent sources say. Theroadislong (talk) 08:54, 30 April 2024 (UTC)