Wikipedia:Peer review/Fort St. John, British Columbia/archive1

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I want this article peer reviewed for good article status (and maybe featured article status).

Thanks, Cos ^{(X + Z)} 01:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments after a quick skim:

There should be a citation at the end of each paragraph, minimum.
The history section seems to end in 1966. Any recent events of note in the city?
Government section has too much information about past MLAs and MPs. I would cut down on this information and merge it together.
I suggest that the sources are archived using IA Bot
done Cos ^{(X + Z)} 00:39, 1 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The stats in "Education" should be updated with more recent sources.

Hamilton, Ontario, one of Wikipedia's featured articles, for some ideas on new sections that can be added to the article. I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 03:25, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]