Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/July 15, 2016
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Dweller
You've done a great job with this man's diverse and important life, but I think the alluded reference to the truly groundbreaking Learie_Constantine#Constantine_v_Imperial_London_Hotels should be expanded. --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 11:48, 1 July 2016 (UTC)
- Feel free to make the edit, Dweller. Pinging Brianboulton and Sarastro1 - Dank (push to talk) 12:29, 1 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Dweller, Dank, and Brianboulton: I'm not sure how to get it in here comfortably without it looking shoe-horned. Unless we put it after "In later life he was influential in the passing of the 1965 Race Relations Act in Britain", but then that messes up the chronology. I've no objection at all to it going in, but I'm open to suggestions as to how we do it. (And whatever change we make here, I think needs to go into the article lead as well) Sarastro1 (talk) 20:46, 1 July 2016 (UTC)
- I've extended the third sentence, to underline that Learie suffered discrimination, though there isn't room in a brief blurb to cite the case that's detailed in the article. I think that will do. Brianboulton (talk) 21:16, 1 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Dweller, Dank, and Brianboulton: I'm not sure how to get it in here comfortably without it looking shoe-horned. Unless we put it after "In later life he was influential in the passing of the 1965 Race Relations Act in Britain", but then that messes up the chronology. I've no objection at all to it going in, but I'm open to suggestions as to how we do it. (And whatever change we make here, I think needs to go into the article lead as well) Sarastro1 (talk) 20:46, 1 July 2016 (UTC)
Nice work, thanks --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 09:23, 4 July 2016 (UTC)